Marckel's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[My friend]

While this is a very good portrait, crisp and all that, you're incorrectly rating maturity for this image. Based on the system, I don't see any nudity, violence, explicit text or adult themes. Be careful, you don't want to confuse the audience.

[Zweihander]

Very nice indeed! That's quite a strange pose you used but you've pulled it off pretty well. The coloring is quite minimal, but the design is pretty neat. Add in those details you put in some of your other pieces with a touch of refined colors and I'm sure you'll increase the appeal to the piece!

[Battle animation]

Damn, the animation is smooth and such detail in the movements! I really dig the creature designs too. Great work, dude!

[Run Boy Run!]

The motion is good but increase the frame rate! It'll look smoother.

FlumpyTripod responds:

Yeah. I was trying to go for a NES-esque walk cycle, so I was trying to use the least amount of frames that I could.

[Dad N Me]

Not bad at all! Keep at it.

[Campus Fashion]

Boo, go back to DA...

Just messing with ya, XD.

I like the line-art, it's all clean and the flow is pulled off well. Give some more line weight variation a try, it may improve your style. Cel-shading was pulled off quite well although a better contrast (especially on the legs) would definitely be nice. The little notes you wrote around the piece is a nice touch but that shade of purple on the blue background makes it slightly difficult to read. Great work though!

MoonBunny responds:

I'll take note! Thank you very much for the feedback <3

[High Speed Pen Flight]

Hey there. Awesome work! Love the aesthetics and design. The frame-rate isn't the highest but it's amazing overall!

[arthorich encapsulation]

Oh the hues, it's amazing!

Lord-Urien responds:

I wasnt feeling the colors for this one, but im glad they work

[Showtime]

Haha! I recognized them immediately. Awesome work dude!

TreC101 responds:

Haha thank you c:

[Under-The-Surface-Complete]

Hey! Really good I must say, but if there's any improvements that can be made it must be the textures. I feel this looks much too glossy for skin and the shading feels unnatural for the eye in the darker side of the face. Nevertheless, composition was well done, the concept was clearly portrayed and the execution was overall excellent!

TauDA responds:

Thanks :). Yeh the whole thing was painted using a the soft airbrushes so it all smoothed over too well! I shall have to attempt it again in a few months after some more tutorials!