Marckel's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Rose Angel | character sheet]

Interesting character and really nice angles!

CozyPop responds:

thanks :) We just put up an intro animation for her, and we did some smash style attack animations with her that will go up soon.

[Cabe Hunting Outfit]

While the design is interesting and the lighting is well placed, the lack of shadows directly beneath and in areas of the body where it should be darker makes the drawing seems off.

Circuitreats responds:

Ahh, thank you so much! I wasn't even considering the fact that, despite the scene taking place at night, the lighting I created should still leave some dramatic shadows both in and under the body. I absolutely agree with you, and thank you so much for your comment! I'll be sure to keep that in mind for future drawings. :)

[Fairy door, night]

Love the color choice and the perspective!

[PICO DAY 2019 ENTRY -"Endless Handbag"]

This is perfect. Newgrounds at its finest.

DeimosArt responds:

perfect?? nahh man, but thanks so much!

[lollipop]

The foreshortening works great on this one but the anatomy is a bit warped from the torso up. The chest should not be upright as the spine does not naturally curve more than a few degrees backwards. The facial expression is nice though!

[poukemone]

This is the animation style you're going for? Dayum! Can't wait to see it

[Obsidan, frontpage]

The way you render the anatomical details is really great! The texture-less black flowers are a bit too jarring though compared to the rough texture you used everywhere else.

[Ashley]

The colors and texture are really well done! The anatomy seems quite off though; the head is a bit unproportional.

Ortani responds:

Thank you for your comment and your criticism! I definitely see where you are coming from, I did try to fix the head a little too late into the drawing, but end up leaving it because I didn't know what exactly was wrong with it, but it's done now, another thing to note for next time, thank you again!

[if you're alone in a striped empty room, you carry out emergency floor sitting]

At least it's not a really tiny room. Claustrophobia is no fun.

4/5 title too long; can't read

Oddlem responds:

The full title's in the url, also I feel that lol

[Another Lady Pegasys Drawing]

The rim lighting is pretty spot on! Shading and perspective isn't quite there yet but it's a good start.

ericblak responds:

Thank man, right now i'm just having fun with the art again. My next one will be killer