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Not enough sound effects! Its jarring to suddenly hear noises in between absolute silence. With such a short time, perhaps it would've been better to skip the sounds altogether. The animation is pretty well done though!

TubeSocSamurai responds:

Appreciate the feedback!
I was gonna put sound throughout the animation but,
I ran out of time for the challenge.

So short but so good!

How did I miss this one? Shinji's heroic personality shines beautifully when portrayed in such a majestic manner.

I didn't get the joke but the animation and voice acting was really nice! Quite an effective ad.

Enophano responds:

Thanks! Let me explain the joke. Johnny (the guy on the right) gets blamed for pulling the fire alarm as a false alarm.

A true law-abiding citizen finally. Well done Fareeze.

Yep. Terrifying alright but pretty damn good.

Like many of the recent comments below, personally I feel it should be M (or at least T). Still, one can't deny there is some quality to the animation and sound despite lacking good writing.

2/5 The author would have done better if they'd stick to what was clearly the intended audience and not try to cover it up as something else.

YowLifeProductions responds:

"some quality to the animation and sound "

Thank you(I think that was meant to be a compliment), I'm always trying to improve my animation skills.

"despite lacking good writing."

What exactly does that even mean here? The premise was basic and with no dialogue it became a film told mostly through expressions and movements.

What "writing" would have made the film better?

"The author would have done better if they'd stick to what was clearly the intended audience and not try to cover it up as something else."

What the heck are you talking about? I've always made animations I wanted to see. In this case, I wanted a video of Queen Boo taunting the viewer.

It just so happens that there was: No Nudity, No violence, No explicit audio, No Explicit text, and No Adult themes. Just because you felt awkward doesn't justify a rating change.

Original? I think @Doomroar may be fair with their suspicion. I'd understand if you intentionally make incorrect subtitles (there's that famous butterfly meme) but the dialogues don't even make sense and why'd you bother using voice overs if they don't support the actual content?
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Phone call to Sakura junior high?
The landlord?
Respecting some person's father???
The President?????
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I can't be consistently mishearing five times through. This script is as broken as it can be and the only good thing is that there's at least effort in delivering a quick joke. As for the character designs and style, they could appeal to quite large crowds which I admit is a fine choice, kudos to you.

So 2/5 congrats on making pictures move though I'm disappointed in current comedy and if it was indeed ripped off... even more so.

The random Japanese BS is still the best.

3/5 Can't compare to your Spongebob version tho

The random Japanese sentences are probably the best part xD

Sleep-deprived and impulsive

Age 26, x

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